Silence reigned in the richly appointed room as Dashiell made this pronouncement. Finally,
“An army?”
“That’s what I’m afraid of. It’s the only explanation for raising a demi-goddess. They want numbers.”
“Well then,” Dr. Wexler said, “that makes it fairly obvious where they’ll go, doesn’t it?”
Dashiell and
“Well...” she hesitated. “If you truly believe that raising an army is their goal…there’s only one place to go around D.C. -
Dashiell looked thunderstruck. “Of course. They can literally raise an army. My God. Think of the damage they could do.”
“It’s a little more disturbing than that,
“So we need to stop them before they succeed,”
“That’s the conclusion I’m coming to,” Dashiell replied. “So where would they set up?
Dr. Wexler spoke. “Well, they’ll need a fire. I’ll believe they can do without the cave, especially since being in one of Hecate’s domains will strengthen their connection to her. But the spell repeats the phrase ‘Fire burn and cauldron bubble.’ They have to build one.”
“Well,”
“But remember, the park isn’t entirely empty,” Dr. Wexler chimed in. “There’s a dress Marine guarding the Tomb of the Unknown Soldier twenty-four hours a day. If he saw a fire, he’s sure to call it in.”
“Unless, of course, he’s used to seeing one,” Dashiell said quietly. “There’s one place in the cemetery an open flame wouldn’t be noticed, because it’s already burning. The tomb of JFK.”
3 comments:
I'm a huge fan of Shakespeare, and detective work. I really like that Dash is using deductive reasoning to figure out the problem, and it's logical.
I also really like your punchy writing style.
But it bugs me that nothing's actually happened since the bodies were found. Just talking/reading and problem solving. Not really "actions," if you get what I'm saying.
Although, I'm fairly certain there will be a lot of activity in the graveyard, with 3 witches and a possible undead army.
I appreciate the comments as always.
I see what you're saying about the relative lack of action. And trust me, it will be remedied.
But I don't want to rush through the deductive part, because otherwise it seems to easy.
I honestly thought, when I set out to write the last few chapters, that they'd go much faster. I didn't think it'd take three chapters to get from arriving at the library to realizing Arlington was the place to be.
I think if I were updating daily, or was in paper form, it would seem much quicker.
But I promise - lots of action in the cemetery.
There is a quick reader poll at the main blog - here - http://allantmichaels.blogspot.com/2008/04/quick-reader-poll.html
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